Dec 6, 2023

Writing

 Here's an example of difficult to follow writing (In The Washington Post no less!).

A panel of federal judges is considering whether to temporarily block a Montgomery County school district decision to disallow opt-outs for LGBTQ+ books.

So wait, if they disallow them, does that mean....they can NOT decide? Or they can not ban them? Or they just can't refuse to take part in....

Later in the story, they try to explain:

Tuesday’s proceedings in Richmond were focused on reversing a decision from a lower court that denied the parents an injunction so that they could opt out of the LGBTQ+ storybooks while the case continued.

I give up.

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